it gets better
not because of fate or
bleeding through the years;
suffocate your past
and never give up.
© Ben Ditmars 2015
Blood Loss
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Like Peter Pan, right? Very good post!
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Well, with more suffocation.
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Right on, Ben! Oh, I was browsing the haiku listings in my Kindle and came across your name! Am I mistaken. or do I need to buy another book?! 🙂
Ron
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That’s so cool! Thank you, Ron! 😀
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Wow fabulous
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Thank you 😀
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Absolutely- this took my breath away
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Reblogged this on Souldier Girl and commented:
Boom! I’m in love with this
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Reblogged this on Jin Okubo.
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I loved it (:
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